Need to write gross sales emails like a professional?
Kristina and Will take a look at frequent electronic mail errors (utilizing actual examples) and rewrite them as a way to study what to do otherwise.
Be part of Kristina Finseth (Sr. Supervisor, Outbound Development Advertising and marketing at Greenhouse) and Will Allred (Co-Founder & COO at Lavender) to get TWO views and TWO approaches on actual gross sales emails, each week on Gross sales Hacker.
Watch the re-write, and take a look at the earlier than and after emails beneath! 👇
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Will,
I wished to comply with up on my final electronic mail.
Our retention charge working with firms like yours is 87% after 2 months as a result of we preserve bringing them new prospects.
Our electronic mail tech + your killer provide, despatched 100s of instances a day to focused lead lists – you’ll constantly generate leads.
Merely put – what we do, works.
As a result of we’re particularly in search of information, analytics and software program firms much like you, we solely have 5 spots obtainable in your business.
Would you be open to debate the above over a fast 15-minute name?
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Observe Up 1: BAR Your Case Research
Will, are you aware of _____?
After we met them, they appeared to be at an identical stage. Most leads got here via their PLG movement.
We bolted onto their outbound crew. Particularly, we targeted on serving to scale up their particular person person base.
In consequence, their crew needed to 2x to handle the certified inbound. Month-to-month MRR progress has 2x’d.
Has your crew achieved any outbound for this but?
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Observe Up 2: Considerate Bump
Hey Will, did you catch my word?
I reached out as a result of we’ve been having plenty of success working with PLG pushed firms.
If outsourcing a few of your outbound isn’t a precedence, simply let me know. Pleased to share a few of what we’ve seen working.
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