Wish to write gross sales emails like a professional?
Kristina and Will have a look at widespread e mail errors (utilizing actual examples) and rewrite them with the intention to be taught what to do in a different way.
Be a part of Kristina Finseth (Sr. Supervisor, Outbound Development Advertising at Greenhouse) and Will Allred (Co-Founder & COO at Lavender) to get TWO views and TWO approaches on actual gross sales emails, each week on Gross sales Hacker.
Watch the re-write, and take a look at the earlier than and after emails under! 👇
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The Unhappy State of InMail
Topic: AI/ML and Huge Information Tech Staff At COMPANY
I hope you might be doing properly.
I’m writing to you to discover alternatives for our firms to work collectively.
Through the years, we now have constructed strong capabilities within the space of Huge knowledge and AI/ML. We work as an offshore supply middle for a lot of US-based tech firms. This engagement offers our purchasers substantial price benefit and entry to a tech workforce that works 24/7.
COMPANY India Restricted is a publicly listed firm on India’s largest inventory trade, Nationwide Inventory Change (NSE), having a workforce of 350+ builders and designers and 30+ international purchasers with our Workplaces within the USA, India & East Africa
Our workforce is predicated out of US. Wouldn’t it be potential to satisfy you over a cup of espresso someday within the subsequent few days and share our worth proposition?
Regards,
Rep Rep Rep
Advertising Affiliate
COMPANY
www.COMPANY.com
Right here’s what your reader sees
Desktop view
Cellular view
Take 1: Personalization Sandwich 🥪 (29 phrases)
Topic: Your E-newsletter
Will, in your weekly e mail you talked about hiring for AI.
Doesn’t seem like you’ve stuffed the position. Have you ever thought-about non-US expertise for the place?
Love what you’re constructing.
Take 2: Double Commentary (43 phrases)
Topic: Lavender Product Query
Will – testing Lavender’s product. Looks like the info it generates is driving lots of your content material.
I’d guess Eng is strapped to concentrate on roadmap. Any ideas on a component time AI workforce to assist unearth nuggets on your content material technique?
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