Need to write gross sales emails like a professional?
Kristina and Will take a look at widespread electronic mail errors (utilizing actual examples) and rewrite them with the intention to be taught what to do otherwise.
Be part of Kristina Finseth (Sr. Supervisor, Outbound Progress Advertising at Greenhouse) and Will Allred (Co-Founder & COO at Lavender) to get TWO views and TWO approaches on actual gross sales emails, each week on Gross sales Hacker.
Watch the re-write, and take a look at the earlier than and after emails under! 👇
Topic: Your new POC (Firm)
Hello Will,
Completely happy Halloween! Know you’ve been engaged with Your Contact since early Summer time,however right this moment was Your’s final day with Firm. Reaching out with a pleasant “hey” as I’ll be your new level of contact shifting ahead!
Thought to shoot you an invitation to Firm’s Activate Tour NYC coming November ninth from 4-8 pm! It’d be nice to fulfill you in individual because it’ll be an superior night time to attach with fellow entrepreneurs, Firm execs, and Firm prospects in NYC. Would love so that you can pop by and community with fellow leaders inside the business!
Congratulations in your continued success and hopefully I’ll see you there!
Kindly,
Take 1
Topic: NYC Wednesday?
Will –
We’re internet hosting an occasion for advertising and marketing leaders this Wednesday. Can I depend you in?
We’re getting a few of our prime Firm prospects in NYC collectively. Thought you’d take pleasure in.
I do know your cofounders are primarily based in NYC. Noticed your location set to Atlanta, however I wasn’t certain for those who’d be round.
Will
Ps. It’s been a minute because you final caught up together with your account supervisor Niki. She’s since left, so a little bit heads up I’ll be your new level of contact.
Take 2
Topic:
Firm | bandwidth | NYC
Hey Will,
You final related with us in June. It didn’t appear you had time to concentrate on implementing Firm then.
Given the posts on hiring, I used to be curious if issues have modified.
Will
Ps. Know you and your cofounders have been touring. You in NYC on Wednesday? We’re getting a number of advertising and marketing leaders collectively for dinner & drinks.
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