Need to write gross sales emails like a professional?
Kristina and Will have a look at widespread electronic mail errors (utilizing actual examples) and rewrite them with the intention to be taught what to do in another way.
Be part of Kristina Finseth (Sr. Supervisor, Outbound Progress Advertising at Greenhouse) and Will Allred (Co-Founder & COO at Lavender) to get TWO views and TWO approaches on actual gross sales emails, each week on Gross sales Hacker.
Watch the re-write, and take a look at the earlier than and after emails under! 👇
Topic: Going to SaaStr this 12 months?
Howdy Will,
xxxxxxx is an occasion sponsor from Sept thirteenth – fifteenth and will likely be positioned at Sales space #xxx.
For a little bit of context, xxxxxxx is a product-led development platform for internet and cellular merchandise that helps corporations optimize their consumer’s expertise with instruments like in-app onboarding checklists, bulletins, product excursions, and surveys.
Corporations generally method xxxxxxx searching for assist with:
- Consumer Onboarding
- Activation & Conversion Charges
- New Characteristic Adoption
- Churn & Retention
If any of this resonates with you, come go to our sales space at SaaStr! Can’t make it? Schedule a demo right here as an alternative.
Hope to see you there.
xxxxxxx
Take 1: Did My Homework
Topic: PLG @ SaaStr
Noticed you and the staff are headed to SaaStr, Will!
I needed to catch up on the occasion. With Dorothy and Josh approaching board to steer gross sales, I think about you’re utilizing product information to assist prioritize their time.
Curious to be taught what you’ve been doing to leverage product information. We assist groups discover the indicators to ship extra scaled interactions… or interventions.
Will
Take 2: Didn’t Do My Homework
Topic: PLG @ SaaStr
Is the staff heading to SaaStr, Will?
We’re reaching out to PLG corporations to attach on the occasion. We assist PLG groups make sense of their product information to tweak issues like onboarding and lowering churn.
If you’re, I’d like to catch up. We’ve got a sales space (#123) however would love to attach 1:1.
Let me know!
Will
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